Copyediting Choice Band Tyranitar [QC 2/2] [GP 0/1]

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[SET]
name: Choice Band
move 1: Stone Edge
move 2: Knock Off
move 3: Earthquake
move 4: Ice Punch
item: Choice Band
ability: Sand Stream
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Flying / Dark / Rock

[SET COMMENTS]

Choice Band Tyranitar is one of the strongest wallbreakers in the tier, with its massive attack stat, strong spammable STAB combo hitting key threats such as Latios, Tornadus-T, Zapdos, and Slowking, and key coverage moves to hit its counterplay. It can also leverage its great natural bulk, especially when combined with its Special Defense boost from sand, to defensively answer special attackers like Zapdos and Latios. Earthquake combines with Stone Edge very well for near perfect coverage, hitting many Steel types who otherwise take Tyranitar's moves solidly, including Tinkaton and Cobalion. Ice Punch is the most common fourth move, hitting Kommo-o and OHKOing Hydrapple. Tera Dark can boost the sheer strength of Tyranitar's Knock Off, 2HKOing itemless Toxapex and doing greater damage to walls like Hippowdon and Rhyperior. It also lets it avoid super effective hits from moves in its base form, such as Greninja Surf/Hydro Pump, Iron Crown Tachyon Cutter, and Excadrill STABs, and KO back. However, it leaves it vulnerable to its own Sandstorm chip and voids the Special Defense boost from Sand. Tera Rock can also similarly boost the power of its Stone Edge, letting it 2HKO Max Defense Hydrapple which is otherwise its most common switchin. This also lets it keep the Sand Special Defense boost and avoid chip, to let it take on Latios and Zapdos attacks more easily. Tera Flying can be used to obtain a resistance/immunity from Fighting and Ground moves respectively, from offensive checks such as Excadrill, Cobalion, and Mienshao, but the Stealth Rocks weakness can be costly.

Tyranitar often appreciates slow pivots to help it enter safely as it is not recovering on its own, namely Slowking, who also offers Future Sight support to help it break through some of its checks, such as Kommo-o and Toxapex even harder. It can also help defensively check foes like Iron Crown and Keldeo, and offer paralysis to let Tyranitar outspeed opponents such as Tornadus-T, Latios, and Iron Crown. Another good partner for Tyranitar is Excadrill, who even with the limited sand turns, can revenge kill fast threats that may threaten out Tyranitar with OHKOs, such as Keldeo and Cobalion. Excadrill also helps wear down their shared checks of Rhyperior and Kommo-o, and Rapid Spin can allow Tyranitar to live to break longer due to no longer taking hazard chip. Hazard setters can provide support to chip defensive pokemon like Hydrapple, Hippowdon, Rhyperior, and Kommo-O into kill range from Tyranitar, while Tyranitar can Knock Off the Heavy-Duty Boots that these pokemon are using to avoid the hazards. Cobalion also helps defensively check revenge killers to Tyranitar like Lokix and both Ogerpon formes, while providing pivot opportunities on opponents, namely Slowking. Sandy Shocks can offensively check potential Tyranitar switchins or revenge killers like Okidogi and Tinkaton, and can act as an alternative Zapdos check and volt blocker. Zapdos allows checking of Tornadus-T and can offer pivot switchin opportunities to Tyranitar, and can check Ogerpon-base and Lokix. Static paralysis can allow Tyranitar to outspeed would-be faster threats and deal great damage. Tornadus can be a great partner for Tyranitar, checking many threats that it may let in and forcing switches of its own which can bring in Tyranitar to wreak havoc. Its flying typing and solid special bulk with Regenerator can allow it to check Cobalion, Greninja, and assist Tyranitar with checking Latios. Ogerpon and Hydrapple can work well alongside Tyranitar, checking Water-type threats such as Greninja and Azumarill that Tyranitar lets in. Scizor and Lokix can help revenge kill or pressure strong threats to Tyranitar such as Ogerpon, Greninja, Tinkaton, and Hydrapple, including removing potential Air Balloons from Tinkaton and Cobalion to allow them to be vulnerable to Tyranitar's Earthquake.

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[SET]
name: Choice Band
move 1: Stone Edge
move 2: Knock Off
move 3: Earthquake
move 4: Ice Punch
item: Choice Band
ability: Sand Stream
nature: Adamant
evs: 84 HP 252 ATK 172 SPE 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Flying Dark / Rock / Flying

[SET COMMENTS]

Choice Band Tyranitar is one of the strongest wallbreakers in the tier, with its massive attack stat and strong moves. It can utilize its great special bulk in sand to enter in on special attackers such as..., or be slow pivoted in from teammates such as Slowking. Save this for team options just expand that its decent bulk under sand lets it come in vs X and Y to get chances to break. Sand Stream helps Tyranitar's special tanking ability, as well as helping chip down many common defensive pokemon. Not necessary to state Earthquake combines with Stone Edge very well for near perfect coverage, hitting many Steel types who otherwise resist Tyranitar's moves such as... Ice Punch is the most common fourth move, hitting Hydrapple and Kommo-o. I'd specifically state that Ice Punch OHKO's Hydrapple 172 Speed EVs allow you hit 201 speed to creep the many defensive pokemon hitting that benchmark, You cannot Speed creep another Pokemon trying to Speed creep something else in an analysis. It has to invest for a mon at either max Speed or zero. In this case, I also could not find anything relevant the HP would help with so I have set the EVs to max max. but more can be invested as it is a very crowded speed tier. Flying tera can allow you to avoid strong super effective fighting or ground hits, but Tera should not be used unless necessary, as this leaves it vulnerable to Stealth Rocks and its own sand chip. Mention Tera Dark and Rock briefly first as a means to boost the power of its STAB attacks, if you can find an example of an OHKO that would be great too.

Tyranitar often appreciates slow pivots to help it enter safely as it is not recovering on its own, namely Slowking, who also offers Future Sight support to help it break through some of its checks such as... even harder. Another good partner for Tyranitar is Excadrill, who even with the limited sand turns, can revenge kill or punch through key mons. Again too vague for the reader, explain with examples. Another good synergy with Tyranitar is spikes, as they help it break through checks even harder, while it can Knock Off the Heavy Duty Boots that those pokemon are using to resist spikes, or hit Flying-Types with strong STAB Stone Edges. Again examples

Some stuff I think you need to mention:

  • Alternative checks to Latios and Torn-T as this set lacks the bulk to pivot into them
  • Checks to Grass-types like Ogerpon, Hydrapple, Ogerpon-C

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